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The darkness, she is astounding
She is my foundation, my grounding
Hell has no fury like the gaze from her eyes
Parting the light, destroying the skies

Her lips conceal  the kiss of death
Her touch houses the feel of regret
She is the darkness, she is my pain
She is my captor, to her heart I am slain

She is the end, she has no beginning
She is the chaos that sends me spinning
She is my emotion, she is entirely my dream
She is my conscious, she is my everything

She is the passion, the disease without a cure
She is filled with darkness, she is impure
She kisses the twilight with such an ease
Bringing forth a horrible fatal disease

Hearts shall wither, such as mine
She will be the Queen of Destruction over time
Kiss the twilight oh darkness, bring forth your reign
Leave me deserted upon your elegant plane

Kiss the twilight, my love
Make the heavens shake above
The angels shall cry your tears
The Earth shall forever feel your fears

You are but the darkness, you are great and divine
You are the memories that haunt my mind
Love is far and few between
Kiss the twilight my love you are my everything.
©2004-2009 ~Chaoticinsanity
:iconchaoticinsanity:

Author's Comments

You can see this as a "dark" love poem. You could see this as the pain of love all shifted into a few choice emotions. Regardless of what it is (which I have yet to decide) it is another poem to add to my collection of emotions.

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:icontrish-dancegurl:
I really like the structure of this. the rhymes make it stick in my head. my favourite stanza is the third.

I see no hang-ups here, just some damn good poetry. keep it up :)

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your mom - rated 'e' for everyone.
:iconchaoticinsanity:
Well I'm glad you like you, I try to add all the feeling I can to pour into the words and get the true meaning of the poem out to who reads it. Thanks for the comment/compliment :D

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The past is subjective, the future is promised to no one. Live today as if it was your last.
:icontrish-dancegurl:
not a problem!! :D

and now, I shall :+devwatch: you!

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your mom - rated 'e' for everyone.
:iconchaoticinsanity:
Sweet, Thanks.

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The past is subjective, the future is promised to no one. Live today as if it was your last.
:iconwordsoftheheart:
Wonderful structure. Meter is great. I see one typo (un pure should be impure). The contents of this poem is extremely felt. I love it! Keep it up!

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"I have all the answers...it's just that most of them aren't right."

-Unknown
:iconchaoticinsanity:
lmao OH MAN I can't believe I screwed up like that, hahaha ty =D

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The past is subjective, the future is promised to no one. Live today as if it was your last.
:iconwordsoftheheart:
No problem. Everyone makes mistakes like that every now and then. :D

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"I have all the answers...it's just that most of them aren't right."

-Unknown
:iconchaoticinsanity:
It's quite a habit for me when I really get into a poem lol

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The past is subjective, the future is promised to no one. Live today as if it was your last.
:iconxblackbutterflyx:
i love your poem, its beautiful.
and where have you been mister? lol i haven't seen you on aim in ages and i've been worried sick, thinking that something else happened after your accident at work. i was finally able to get my password on this and log on to see if your at least alive. and i'm glad you are. i miss ya budy.:hug:

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sevas tra

:blackrose::butterflytwo::blackrose:


when i put a gun to your head, it just means i wanna get rough with you.

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December 20, 2004
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